Loooong Species info + World Info (Side project!)

I spent all day fine-tuning this document to who off more information regarding these mysterious critters I posted a few days ago: 

I'm writing this to do an interest check from people. Would anyone be interested in owning one of these dragons? *I call them 'dergs' in the document. It's a temp name, I hope to have a working name by the time I fully release this species.*

That Classes Sheet actually shows off three males, sans their various decorations and such. In order, they are: Breeze, Knight, and Wake.

The females, I'll be posting soon as well.

Please, guys, keep in mind that whatever info on the sheet I posted are very rough ideas, to say the least. I hope to make finalized sheets for every section within it, and critques and such would be very valuable at this stage of my little project.  

Here is the link: 
docs.google.com/document/d/11K…